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 Post subject: A rhyme
PostPosted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 8:41 am 
A Rhyme for Deal or No Deal

Please Mr Edmunds if we may
Deal or No deal can we play
Win or lose its more than a game
Its our moment of TV fame

Could Mr Banker not be a miser
By making each offer a little higher
We know he wants best for us
For if not we'll go home by bus

So to the boxes here we go
Only the blues we must show
Lets save the reds to the end
For our overdrafts they will mend

Desmond Lune


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 Post subject: Re: A rhyme
PostPosted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 11:43 am 
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Hi Mick


Welcome to the forum I liked the rhyme

Best wishes

Welf :wink:


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PostPosted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 12:18 pm 
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Oh how lovely, Mick. I liked your poem. :D And welcome to the forum.

All the best,

Sunshine :D


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PostPosted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 2:41 pm 
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What a clever fella. I wish I could write rhymes like that. If you go on Deal, Mick do make sure you have a really 'wicked' rhyme to recite to lead the viewers into the first break. It will go down exceedingly well.

Well done to you. Tw'dee


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